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I feel so calm
I feel so collected
I feel so serene
I feel so protected

Then, out of the blue
Eyes swell up with tears
Hearing loud, echoing voices
I block them, hands over ears

Heart pounds, intimidated
Blood rushes to my head
Trying to contain pressure
While I am seeing red

Angering, provoking sounds
That interrupt soothing naps
That deafens my ears
And make my mind snap

Head pounds, enraged
Body visibly shaken
Tranquility shattered
Profuse breathes being taken

Inhale...
Exhale...
Inhale...
Exhale...

Mind twists
With balled fists

Inhale... Exhale...

Heart pounds
Louder sounds

Inhale. Exhale.

Gasping increases
Peace in pieces

Inhale...

I cry, I scream
I break, I seem...

...to have snapped...

...Exhale...

Inhale...
Exhale...
Inhale...
Exhale...
...
I was a bit pissed... I wrote this to make me feel a bit better...
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RoguetheScarredAngel Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013  Student Writer
this is really good i like how you wrote it and i like the pattern you used. well done :heart:
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goddessofownage Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you very much :)
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RoguetheScarredAngel Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013  Student Writer
your welcome
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VampiraFang1 Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
nice poem. you got the exact emotions of what it feels like when you lose control of your anger
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goddessofownage Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
why thank you :)
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deinktvis Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2013  Student Writer
almost reminds me of my early writing :) good effort!
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goddessofownage Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you. I try...
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PremierEden Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I feel like this sometimes, so I can relate. Good piece!
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goddessofownage Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks :)
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Indestrocto Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Its wonderful
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